[Denied] MPF Applications - thorpemax

[OOC Section]

Steam Name:thorpemax

SteamID::0:1:29724506

Reason for wanting to join:Ive been a MPF before on a sever for about a day before it clossed down i relly enjoy the RP side of it and the responsibility

What do you think the MPF is about?:Helping the citizens and stopping the people who ruin it by just punching every thing and abusing the people on the sever

How long have you been part of this community?:Ive been on the sever for about a month now and really enjoy it the admins are friendly and so the commutiy

How long have you been part of this forum?: I've been here for a couple of days know just getting my wits about me and where to find all the posts easily


[IC Section] (Note you're writing an application form to the commander)

Full Name:Max Thorep.

Date of birth:1990.

Race(asian, european etc):European.

Strengths: I am able to run fast and for a long distance.

Weaknesses:My left arm was shot by anti-citizen so its not as strong as it used to be.

Acceptance of the terms of agreement(Yes/No): Yes

Well to be honest I have not seen you on the sever at all.
Read the rules.

Read rules.. I have not seen you in the sever and this is your frist post.

I have seen him in the server today and he was there for some time. He is also very good at RPing and I know that, because he knows how to follow rules, how to perform, doesn't punchwhore and always rolls when in a situation.

He has been active on the server, but last night I was with him a bit and he didn't roll much in some situations.

If he roleplays without rolls then that's alot better actually..
If his RP is as good as Silent says then I +support this app, cause I've seen him on the server aswell.

He could expand it a lot more in my opinion. I understand you don't need an essay because IC skill that matters, but it's poor in my opinion

If he is really a good RPer as Silent says, then I support it as-well.

thank you for looking at my request
i know i haven't been quite as involved in the forum as i shoud be and yes that was my first post
i will be sure to go back and read the rules as well
i will defiantly get more involved with the community when i get some me time on holiday

chow

max thorpe in spain

Weak grammar, i = I.
Also, use full stops at the end on your lines.

I'm not sure about an Accept or Denie, you broke Rule 5 already but I will void it for you.
Pending.

I don't mean to ruin you application or anything but aren't you ment to have atlest 2 days on forum, as this was posted on the day he joined the forums.

dizzydizzydwarf wrote:I don't mena to ruin you application or anything but aren't you ment to have atlest 2 days on forum, as this was posted on the day he joined the forums.

Yes i was meant to but i was dumb and didn't read the rules.

I did the same thing on mine, but as I said I am not trying to get it declined.

Dizzy, read the posts in the topic before replying to a topic.

Well I don't know if mine counts as a trial op, but I'm giving a +support.

Don't mean to sound rude here but mine weren't voided but his were

What do you think the MPF is about?:Helping the citizens and stopping the people who ruin it by just punching every thing and abusing the people on the sever
You have got the part all wrong fix it please.

Not good enough.
It looks like you do not know the 100% different from OOC and IC.

Denied.

Please do not make another application within 7 days.