[Denied] Roach's MPF Application

[OOC Section]

Steam Name: alex615

SteamID: STEAM_0:0:7966383

Reason for wanting to join: I enjoy being an MPF Officer, I currently run a
serious roleplaying community. With Half life 2 Roleplay, I love the MPF structure
and ranking system. It seems all so, organised.

What do you think the MPF is about?: The MPF is about dealing with any
incivility in C23 with brute force. MPF are well structured and disciplined to make sure
that they do not disobey their superiors. Or they be uncivil.

How long have you been part of this community?: Roughly 5 Days

How long have you been part of this forum?: Few hours.


[IC Section] (Note you're writing an application form to the commander)

Full Name: Paul Roach

Date of birth: 14/08/2005

Race(asian, european etc): British

Strengths: Agile and well disciplined.

Weaknesses: Torn tendon from pre-war.

Acceptance of the terms of agreement(Yes/No): Yes.

I honestly think this is one of the apps where all of it was rushed. No effort "Sorry if I offend you" put in, And made in less then five minutes.

Ehh.. This isn't great.. you could have done so much better

Pre-war? All pre-war fighters were killed.

I really suggest you to edit/expand your application, because according to this: It'll get denied.

Im going to agree with the others, this looks rushed.
Also you have put down you have been active 5 days yet I have never seen you on the sever until today.

Admin message:
- Forum Rule(s) broken : Rule number 5
- Server Rule(s) broken : N/A

Seems like every one agreed.
Also, it would be weird if a 10 year old child asks to be an Unit.

Denied.

Please do not make another application within 7 days.